Saturday, May 5, 2012

fifteen nickels


I DROVE FOR COFFEE BEFORE WORK
AND I PLACED MY CUP BESIDE THE REGISTER.
I SWITCHED THE LIGHTS ON AND BEGAN TO TAKE
THE DARK CURTAINS DOWN. I  WAS ANXIOUS 
TO SEE HOW UGLY MY MISTAKES WERE LAST NIGHT.
EVERYONE KNOWS I CAN'T COUNT.

NICKELS AND PENNIES WERN'T LOUD ENOUGH
TO MAKE ANY CUSTOMERS GIVE ME SPACE.
THEY QUACKED, "PERDON, JOVEN" AND I LOST COUNT.
I GRABBED MY COUNTED STASH OF DIMES,
GAVE THEM A BRIEF LOOK THROUGH THE CORNERS
OF MY CAT-NIBBLED GLASSES.

FAKE FACES WALK THE HALLS OF THE MALL
ON SATURDAY MORNINGS
FROM THE LOUD HAIR IRON LADY WITH THE ADAM'S APPLE
WHO SAYS "HELLO HAHN-EEEEEE" TO EVERY
WHISPER WAVES MY EARS PICK UP FROM THE OTHERS.
THEY THINK I'M STUPID.

pardon my tenses. 

3 comments:

  1. I so enjoy reading your writing.

    This one made me smile. You keep getting better, I need to catch up to your coolness.

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  2. nataly!!!!! thank you :']


    i am registered for another two creative writing classes! :D

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  3. Love the details you put in. Great job :D

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